The play starts in darkness and
when the lights go up Kira is there, staring at the audience. Then, for a
moment, it’s dark again and next Kira is on a different spot. The idea is good
and could suggest the ubiquity of the disease but the effect is spoiled by the
use of neon tubes that don’t switch on and off fast enough.
There is a stack of chairs in the
corner and a window on the back wall, which will prove to have symbolic role
within the play. It nods to the ‘bit of sunshine’ Kira can get into her room at
the clinic but also to the loss of her friend Polly.
The topic is a sensitive one and
some of the lines are quite poignant – like when the girl describes the
aberrant pleasure of feeling empty, then full and then empty again. Nonetheless,
the overall impression I get from Bit of
Sunshine is an unsatisfying feeling of a déjà vu. The actress’ presence on scene,
her fiddling with the chairs, going up and down, running back and forth, as
well as her gratuitous swearing and her recurrent yelling, resemble more an
acting workshop than an accomplished piece of theatre.
The language is quite mundane and
filled with phrasal clichés that would apply more appropriately to song writing
than playwriting. It’s as if Zweiback had clear ideas in mind but failed to
find her own voice to express them. My companion, in fact, observed rightfully
that the shouting kept alive a play which, otherwise, risked to become boring.
Despite the troubled matter, its
development is quite straightforward and its conclusion unsurprisingly tragic.
We witness false illusions, cheated hopes and death. We feel for the little
girl who dreams to go to Oxford but is not strong enough to get over her mental
illness once and for all. We relate to her unease and her strive for
perfection. We sympathise with the weakness of her willpower. But nothing about
this play is new – nor its subject, nor its design – and this seem to cause a
lack of engagement on both sides of the stage.
I’d like to think of Bit of Sunshine as a starting point, a
work in progress that is now being tested with the public and takes this
opportunity to flourish into an intense and moving monologue.
Review by Marianna Meloni
Rating: ★★★
Photo credit: Jamie Scott-Smith
Photo credit: Jamie Scott-Smith